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The moon comforts a wave
Before its impending death
Upon the shore
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gummyrabbit Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student Writer
but this is lovely
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cristinewakesuphappy Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:+fav:

hi! i hope you don't mind my humble feature:
your lovely piece is handpicked. (link)

thank you.
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Daghrgenzeen Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love, love, love. :rose:
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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La-Tete-Ailleurs Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Bien. Très bien.
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Professional Writer
Hi! You're featured in the greyshadow's here: fav.me/d6sktzb - :rose:
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Parsat Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013   Writer
This is a haiku done right.
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
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TheOrangeElephant Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist
i love the imagery
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VictorGardel Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Night haiku seems as an every day thing.
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aladdinslamp Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
love it
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IceAngel1234 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Short & simple, great work ^^
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KyotoPhoenix Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
Whoa.
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TheNighttimeWanderer Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student Writer
Fantastic piece!
Well done, you've earned my respect.
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wordeea Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
superbe
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DrisanaRM Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
5,7,5
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darkalleydigital Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
English Haikus can have up to 17 syllables for each line
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darkalleydigital Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*can have up to 17 syllables, with no strict rules for each line. lol that sounds better
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ionthedark Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
Umbreon approves.
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NeroCyaBlaze Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
i have a little difficulty liking haikus, but i loved this one =)
good job
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LadyAnnatar Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
I like this one better than the other one :love:
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GothicBlackAngel Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow... I usually don't like haiku poems (or haiku style poems) but this one is lovely.
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Student2 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
Haikus are meant to be 5 syllables then 7 then 5 again you have 6 then 7 then 4 but none the less nice Haiku :)
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lemonless Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
that's deep
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