The moon comforts a wave
Before its impending death
Upon the shore
but this is lovely
Love, love, love.
Bien. Très bien.
This is a haiku done right.
i love the imagery
Night haiku seems as an every day thing.
Short & simple, great work ^^
Well done, you've earned my respect.
English Haikus can have up to 17 syllables for each line
i have a little difficulty liking haikus, but i loved this one
I like this one better than the other one
Wow... I usually don't like haiku poems (or haiku style poems) but this one is lovely.
Haikus are meant to be 5 syllables then 7 then 5 again you have 6 then 7 then 4 but none the less nice Haiku